Your friend just had a baby. You decided to prepare a present for them. Write a letter and say : 1. Congratulate your friend 2. Ask when would be possible for you to visit 3. Ask what present they would like.
Dear Lelee,
Congratulations babe! I can'
t
believe you have become a mom now. I would say time just flies in a
blink of an eye. It seems like we are becoming so old now. I remember how much you Correct article usage
the
like
to spend time with kids when we were in school. I am sure you must enjoy your motherhood. I am so happy for you my sweetheart.
What's your plan Wrong verb form
liked
on
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for
this
weekend? I can't
tell you how much I am excited to meet your little one. Also
I wanna check how fluffy you are now after being a mumma. I am Add a comma
Also,
preety
sure you must putCorrect your spelling
pretty
a
lot of weight. I can'Change preposition
on a
t
imagine you in a fatty stature.
I am sure just like you, your baby loves gifts. And I am eagerly waiting to empty my pockets to give a
something precious to your little one. As you know me, I am always confused Correct article usage
apply
what
to buy and here, it's Change preposition
about what
a
case of Correct article usage
the
baby
so there is no chance that I can think Add an article
the baby
a baby
anything
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of anything
by
my own. So please tell me what your kid likes the mostChange preposition
on
?
A toy, clothes or something else. I Change the punctuation
.
wanna a
buy something Remove the extra word
wanna
that is
unique and amazing for him.
Can't
wait to meet you. See you soon.Submitted by margijoshi19 on
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Tone & Sensitivity
Try to maintain a respectful and appropriate tone when addressing weight or physical changes in someone, as these topics can be sensitive.
Content & Approach
Be mindful of how jokes or comments might be perceived in written form, especially concerning personal topics.
Specificity in Questions
Consider asking directly about the baby's needs or preferences to show genuine interest and attentiveness.
Positive Opening
You successfully congratulated your friend and expressed your excitement and happiness for them, which is a positive and engaging way to start the letter.
Directly Addressing Tasks
You clearly and effectively asked about a good time for a visit and for gift preferences, which directly addresses the tasks.
Logical Structure
The letter is organized in a logical manner with distinct paragraphs for each task, showcasing good coherence and structure.