The diagram below show how water moves on land and in the ocean.

The diagram below show how water moves on land and in the ocean.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below show how water moves on land and in the ocean.
The diagram shows the movement of
water
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from the
ocean
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to
land
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. It is notable that
sun
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the sun
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evaporates the
water
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in the
ocean
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and causes it to move to the air and be condensed in clouds.
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,
water
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drops off to
land
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from clouds with figures of rain and snow.
Moreover
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, when the
water
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drops off to
land
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, the
water
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moves in three different ways.
First,
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it is normally absorbed
in
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by
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earth
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the earth
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but some of the
water
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could be dropped off
to
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into
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the puddles and
swers
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sewers
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, becoming ‘
ground
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groundwater
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water
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’.
Second,
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It can be dropped off
to
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at
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lakes and rivers
and
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apply
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there would
also
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happened
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the evaporation.
Lastly
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, tons of
water
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can be run off to the
ocean
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, so those
water
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will constribute the process of evaporation,
condensation
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and condensation
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and be changed as a form of rain and snow again.
To sum up
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, the movement of
water
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starts
due to
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the Sun in the
ocean
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and
then
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it moves to the air, clouds, and
finally
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arrives at
land
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.
This
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progress restarts when the
water
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comes to the
ocean
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, ocean, land with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "drops" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 3 times.
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