The chart below shows the number of jobs in tourism related industries in one UK city between 1989 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information on the employment in tourism industries regarding
Resturants
, Correct your spelling
restaurants
Hotels
, Use synonyms
Sport
and leisure, and Travel and tours, every five Fix the agreement mistake
Sports
years
over the period from 1989 to 2009 in a city Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
in
UK
.
In general, over the Correct article usage
the UK
20
Correct word choice
last 20
years
, Use synonyms
Resturants
and Correct your spelling
restaurants
Hotels
provided more jobs Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
the other Correct your spelling
than
industies
did. Correct your spelling
industries
In addition
, there is no certain trend or similar pattern of the numbers in the four industries, the figures went up and fell in different Linking Words
years
.
Looking into the details of the changes in each sector. People Use synonyms
worked
in Restaurants outnumbered Correct pronoun usage
who worked
that
Correct determiner usage
those
of
other sectors over the period except in 1994. The number increased each year and reached a peak at 1600 in 2004 before it fell to 1100 in 2009. Change preposition
in
Numbers
of employees Fix the agreement mistake
Number
of
Change preposition
in
Hotels
Use synonyms
are
quite close Correct subject-verb agreement
is
in
each year. It went up from 1100 in 1989 to 1400 after 5 Change preposition
apply
years
and Use synonyms
then
decreased steadily by approximately 100 every five Linking Words
years
. The figure Use synonyms
of
Travel and tours had Change preposition
for
the
identical trend, but it was 300 less Correct article usage
an
in
each year than that Change preposition
apply
of
Change preposition
for
Hotels
.Use synonyms
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