The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian call center in connection with the various car model they produce.

The graphs below show the number of calls a company received at their Nigerian call center in connection with the various car model they produce.
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The charts illustrate how many phone calls a
car
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manufacturer’s Nigerian call centre took,
according to
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which
car
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model
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was discussed.
Overall
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, the
number
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of calls for every
model
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, except
model
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C, decreased between 2010 and 2015. The
number
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of calls taken concerning the
Model
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C
car
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was the only figure that increased between 2010 and 2015 with 71 and 84 respectively.
Model
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A,
on the other hand
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, was responsible for 52 calls to the Nigerian call centre in 2010, and
this
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total decreased to 49 in 2015. Meanwhile, the
number
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of callers discussing
Model
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B went from 33 down to 24, meaning that it had the lowest figure in both years. Of all the cars manufactured by
this
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company,
Model
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D, despite seeing a decline from 94 to 88 calls, was the most discussed
car
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model
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during both 2010 and 2015.
Model
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E
also
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had a fall in the
number
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of calls it was associated with, dropping from 68 in 2010 to 57.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, model, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Volume of calls
  • Trend analysis
  • Stability
  • Seasonal variations
  • External factors
  • Customer feedback
  • Call center metrics
  • Data overview
  • Marketing campaigns
  • Automotive industry
  • Product improvement
  • Call volume comparison
  • Significant changes
  • Periods of stability
  • Customer service improvement
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