The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise by day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
The two bar charts illustrate the ratio of individuals who are under the influence of four kinds of noise pollution in the urban areas and the suburbs during the day and at
the
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night.
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, the proportion of the traffic jam's voters
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the highest
while
the industrial roar was on the lowest level in both areas at any time of the day. By way of comparison, there was
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more
incessent
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incessant
roar in cities of
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Europe specifically during the day.
The traffic
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congestion was the most frequent one with the number of 64
million
people who were affected by
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noise
before sunset and
this
number
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decreased at night to
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48
million
individuals.
However
, 34 and 24
million
were the numbers of
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voters
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for the exact same subject in rural
regins
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regions
.
In addition
, the industry was the lowest source of noise in both places,
likewise
the other factors, the rates are higher in the city. By looking at the charts, no one was influenced by
this
content in villages,
nevertheless
, there were 1.5
million
ones
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having problems with the industries.
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