The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

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The diagram represents how the village of Ryemouth changed from 1995 to the present.

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it is clear that

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several developments have been made to the village including an increase in the number of sports and residential areas. For more illustration, in the north part of the map, there were few houses in 1995. It is noticeable that the number of houses increased located near the main road

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the coastal road in the present. Green areas like farmland were replaced with a golf course and the forest, which used to be next to the farmland, was cut down and turned into a tennis club. Turning to the south, the shop and the fish market were substituted by five restaurants and four apartments.

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the hotel and cafeteria remain unchanged, the car park was built next to the hotel.

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, the fishing business completely disappeared with the removal of fishing ports in the sea.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

156 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Urban development
Infrastructure
Residential area
Commercial district
Public amenities
Greenery
Renovation
Expansion
Demolition
Construction
Accessibility
Public transport
Urbanization
Evolution
Gentrification

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and giver your opinion.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops, why do you think this is happening?is this a positive or negative trend

People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?