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Writing Samples
Band 3

Taking a year of between finishing school and starting university is a waste of students' time. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

After finishing a
person
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person's
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 period of high school there are many choices for
determine
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determining
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major
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a major
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 in
university
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 ,
also
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 may be it
make
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makes
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decision
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a decision
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 wrong department.
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 some
student which
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students who
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 have
desert
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a desert
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for
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to
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study
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university
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 work
to
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take
one-year
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a one-year
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of
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apply
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waste period. In my opinion, I completely disagree with delay , because ability to determine of
university
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 track during
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last
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the last
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seamster
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semester
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 in high education institutions.
In
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On
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 the one hand , individuals could
be
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face several problems around choosing
department
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a department
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in
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for
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the
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a
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university
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 degree.
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for
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 instance, I believe that pre-planning by
Consult
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consulting
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 friends and family about
program
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the program
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it
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apply
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fits their personality.But must they early time before
complection
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complexion
completion
 his journey
study
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.
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,
find
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finding
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 the appropriate specialization
need
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needs
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 some
times
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time
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 no more.
In
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 the other hand , late for starting
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study
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to study
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in
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at
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high
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a high
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 education level
such
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 as
,
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apply
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diploma
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a diploma
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 and bachelor
lead
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leads
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to enter
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apply
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to his professional life
is
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being
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 somewhat late, which makes him lose many opportunities,
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 a person may lose the desire to
study
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due to
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 delaying an entire year.
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,personally if was
same
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the same
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 situation; counties
dircet
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direct
 after
finshing
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finishing
fishing
,
for
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example
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example,
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 many people
were have
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were having
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 problems during
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last
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the last
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 years in schools.
therefore
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 , started directly they are now successful in their professional fields. In conclusion ,
complet
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completing
 the
study
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 trip immediately after finishing school is the best decision for people who want to complete their studies. So as not to lose the passion and desire to complete studies and not to be distracted from entering
university
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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