Taking a year of between finishing school and starting university is a waste of students' time. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
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a major
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makes
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a decision
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students who
desert
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a desert
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to
study
university
work to
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apply
one-year
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a one-year
of
waste period. In my opinion, I completely disagree with delay , because ability to determine of Change preposition
apply
university
track during last
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the last
seamster
in high education institutions.
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semester
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a department
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for
the
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a
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instance, I believe that pre-planning by Capitalize word
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friends and family about Wrong verb form
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program
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the program
it
fits their personality.But must they early time before Correct pronoun usage
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complexion
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study
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times
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the other hand , late for starting Change preposition
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at
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a high
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a diploma
lead
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being
also
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completing
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trip immediately after finishing school is the best decision for people who want to complete their studies. So as not to lose the passion and desire to complete studies and not to be distracted from entering university
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