The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The graph illustrates the number of tourists and the total amount of their spending in five nations in 2012 and 2013.
Overall
, France remained the most popular destination Linking Words
while
Italy was the least for international travellers for the two years. Their expenditure tended to increase in all five nations in 2013 with the USA being the country where the largest amount of money spent by foreign tourists Linking Words
in contrast
to Italy with the least.
Starting with the table of the numbers of visitors to the five countries, they rose by a different extent from 2012 to 2013 except for China with a small drop from 57.7 Linking Words
million
to 55.7 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, their number increased slightly in France and Italy from 83 Linking Words
million
to 84.7 Use synonyms
million
and from 46.4 Use synonyms
million
to 47.7 Use synonyms
million
respectively with the former being the most visited nation and the latter the least. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the rise was more dramatic in the USA and Spain from 66.7 Linking Words
million
to 69.8 Use synonyms
million
and from 57.5 Use synonyms
million
to 60.7 Use synonyms
million
each.
Turning to their total spending in each nation, they seemed to rise in all the examined nations. Use synonyms
For instance
, tourists spent by far the most in the USA with 126. 2 Linking Words
billion
dollars in 2012 and 139.6 Use synonyms
billion
dollars in 2013. Use synonyms
In addition
, there is not a significant difference in the amount of money spent in France, Spain and China from 53.6 Linking Words
billion
to 56.1 Use synonyms
billion
, from 56.3 Use synonyms
billion
to 60.4 Use synonyms
billion
and from 50 Use synonyms
billion
to 51.7 Use synonyms
billion
respectively Use synonyms
whereas
people spent the least in Italy with 41.2 Linking Words
billion
in 2012 and 43.9 Use synonyms
billion
in 2013.Use synonyms
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