The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents changes in the
number
of visitors
who went to four different international museums
( Louvre, London Science Museum
, Vatican Museums
, and Shenzhen Museum
) from 1980 to 2015. Units are measured in millions.
Overall
, it is clear that
the number
of visitors
to the Louvre and Vatican Museums
grew significantly during the given period, while
the figures for the London Science Museum
decreased. In addition
, the number
of visitors
to Shenzhen Museum
fluctuated throughout.
Regarding the number
of people visiting the Louvre, it increased gradually from about 8 million
in 1980 to almost 10 million
in 2015. Likewise
, the number
of people who visited the Vatican Museums
climbed sharply from just above 4 million
in the first year to just under 8 million
in the last
year.
In the case of the London Science Museum
, the number
of visitors
went from exactly 4 million
in 1980 to hit the lowest point at half in 2015. Despite the fluctuation in the number
of visitors
to Shenzhen Museum
, it stayed the same as in the beginning with around 4 million
visitors
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