The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.

The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in

2012 and 2013.
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The table delineates the data on international tourism in the five most developed countries in the
years
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2012 and 2013.
According to
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the data,
it is clear that
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there is a measurable rise in spending from 2012 to 2013. One reason for
this
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is the increased rate of influx of tourists. China is the only nation which witnessed a drop in tourist arrivals in the following year (2013).
Overall
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, France dominates tourist influx throughout the given period, with 83 million and 84.7 million arrivals for the
years
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2012 and 2013 respectively.
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, the USA shows discernible net worth in both
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, which was $126.2 billion in 2012 and $139.6 billion in 2013 respectively.
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China showed a fall in tourist arrivals, it didn't affect the
overall
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revenue generation in the next year.
This
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might be because of inflation. Italy appears to be the least revenue-contributing country. Spain comes next; unlike the rest of the countries, it holds a second position in money generation throughout the given
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourist arrivals
  • influx of tourists
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • infrastructure development
  • revenue generation
  • geographical distribution
  • popular destination
  • regional analysis
  • natural attractions
  • cultural heritage
  • seasonal trends
  • tourism patterns
  • climatic conditions
  • tourism preferences
  • adventure tourism
  • eco-tourism
  • cultural tourism
  • holiday seasons
  • local events
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