The table below shows the number of museum partons by age between 1997 and 2003.
The table chart illustrates the number of museum
visitors
between 1997 and 2003.
According to
the chart, people under 31 years
old are the dominant museum visitors
throughout the period
. Especially, people from 15 to 30 years
old accounted for the largest portion. The next large group is adolescents (under 16 years
old). The total number of visitors
steadily increased during the period
, except between 1997 and 1998, when there was a slight decline.
It is noteworthy that people over 60 years
old hardly visit museums. This
figure was less than 100 visitors
throughout the period
. Interestingly, two age groups (31-45 and 46-60 years
old) fluctuated at 6,000 visitors
and 1,000 visitors
, respectively.
Overall
, while
young age groups (0-15 and 16-30 years
old) showed large proportions of visitors
, the other age groups accounted for small proportions over the period
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