The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.

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range

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of international visitors in 5

countries

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between 2012 and 2013. In

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table there are two general information regarding their visit to

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5

countries

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which are

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number

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a number

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of

tourists

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in 2 years and

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the income that was received from their spending in different areas in their travel. Unlike

China

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, all other

countries

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had a moderate increase in

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of

tourists

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between the

year

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of 2012 and 2013.

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China

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had a gradual decrease in

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number

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a number

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of

tourists

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in 2013, the incomes from these travellers have

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increased in all

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even in

China

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which is

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an unforseen

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unforseen

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unforeseen

result.

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, it has been clearly shown that

Spain

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and

China

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has

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similar

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range

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of travellers in the

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2012 but in the next

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,

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had

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faced a decrease and

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experienced

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moderate increase.

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table shows that

France

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had the most

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of travellers among these 5

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on the other hand

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, Italy had the lowest

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, despite the fact that

France

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had the highest amount of sightseers in the

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USA which is in the second level, strangely had the most earnings from these sightseers.

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fact might be a result of

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USA has more

sightseeings

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sightseeing

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all over the country

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to

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France

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or other

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which is because of

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wide land rather than other lands. It should

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be mentioned that despite the fact that

France

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had more visitors than

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, the received money from

tourists

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are

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likely

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in the first

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but in the second

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,

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had

had

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received more earnings

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to

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France

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. In conclusion, after comparing these 5 lands with each other, it's obvious that the

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of explorers in a

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is not related to the received money from them. There are some factors that can have a

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effect on

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income

such

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as

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of the tourist destination and the

number

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of landmarks or

sightseeings

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sightseeing

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in that destination.

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could increase the

number

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of visitors and the

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of medium

eranings

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earnings

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from them

with

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by

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creating more

intresting

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interesting

areas for explorers or maybe

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the visa procedure

more easy

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.