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and the government can do rule strategy in the future about how to improve skills.
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give positive benefit for some people that good
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skill speaking with work
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. And these two reasons are the evidence of it.
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Try to elaborate more on your reasons and examples. For instance, why do you believe face-to-face communication improves skills more effectively than written communication? Support your points with concrete examples from personal experience or societal observations.
coherence cohesion
Your essay is somewhat difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Ensure that each sentence is complete and clear. Consider using language tools or seeking feedback from a fluent English speaker to improve your writing style.
coherence cohesion
Enhance the logical flow by linking your ideas with cohesive devices. Use conjunctions and transitional phrases such as 'however,' 'moreover,' 'in addition,' and 'therefore.' This will make your argument more compelling and easier to follow.
task achievement
You have a clear standpoint in favor of face-to-face communication, and you attempt to support it with reasons and personal experience.
coherence cohesion
You included a conclusion, which provides a clear ending to your essay.
Fully explain your ideas
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
Paragraph 1 - Introduction
Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion
Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
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