The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.
The table illustrates the five
countries
' rankings for international tourism in 2012 and 2013. The information includes the total number of tourist (measured in millions) and their spending over the years (measured in billion
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billions
US
Dollars).
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of US
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that France was the top country with the largest number of tourists
throughout the given period. However
, in regard to the international visitors' spending, the USA was in the first place.
In terms of the top two countries
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
tourists
in France was 83.0 in 2012 and 84.7 in 2013, while
in the USA, the total overseas
visitors Correct quantifier usage
number of overseas
was
66.7 and 69.8. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, the tourist spending in France decreased from 53.6 to 56.1. Meanwhile, in the USA, the expenditure rose to 139.6.
Regarding the
other three Change preposition
The
countries
, there were Spain, China, and Italy with the number of tourists
reaching 57.5, 57.7, and 46.4, respectively in 2012. The amount of tourist increased by around 1-2 in the next year. Similarly
, how much money was spent by tourists
in the three countries
also
went up to 60.4 for Spain, 51.7 for China, and 43.9 for Italy.Submitted by mmmuuu on
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