You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -ask your friend to send you one of the photographs. -explain why you need that particular photograph -and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.
Dear Raj,
Hope you are doing well. We had a great trip
last
month and I still cherish the time we spent together hiking the Alps. What a splendid sunset view we had from the cliff!!! I believe that episode will be forever etched in my memory.
The reason why I am writing this
letter is to ask you a favour if you could send me one of the photographs. We took a lot of photos during that event and I need a picture where I was trying to hold the sun in my hand. However
, the picture I clicked seemed shaky and it couldn't capture our entire emotions well. I recollect you took the same pose using your camera and I believe that came out well. Hence
, if you could develop that picture and send me the hard copy that would be really helpful.
Thanks for your assistance with this
. Looking forward to the photo's hard copy soon. Let's plan for a similar outdoor hike the next summer as well.
Yours friendly,
RamSubmitted by nusramkumar on
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coherence and cohesion
To achieve a higher score, consider making your request more concise and ensuring that each paragraph has one central idea. While the tone is friendly and appropriate, a bit more precision will further enhance clarity.
task achievement
Consider correcting minor grammatical errors and awkward phrases, such as 'if you could send me' to 'if you could send me one.' This will improve fluency slightly.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are natural and friendly, which is highly suitable for the context.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph is well-organized and maintains a single idea, contributing to the clarity and effectiveness of the letter.
complete response
The letter responds completely to the prompt by asking for a photograph, explaining why it is needed, and mentioning what happened to the original copy.
suitable writing tone
The tone is friendly and consistent, which is highly suitable for writing to a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,