The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about the amount of local
fresh fish caught and imported into Perth, Australia from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that all three categories increased. In addition
, the total group witnessed the biggest changes.
In regard to local fish, its data increased steadily from 2677.7 metric oodles in 2004 to 5702.2 metric tons in 2007. After that, it reached a peak of precisely 8136.2 by 2008. This
is followed by a gradual drop from 7844.9 in 2009 to about 5030 in the last
year of the timeframe. Moreover
, the period from 2004 to 2011 saw a fluctuation in the number of fish imported to other countries. The figure for this
group hit its highest point of approximately 1277 metric oodles in 2012, then
its data started to drop to nearly 780 by the end of the period.
In terms of total, there was a stable growth from 3142.2 in
2004 to over 8940 metric tons in 2009. However
, the rest of the timeframe sawthe
opposite trend which total ended at 5814.7.Correct your spelling
saw the
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