The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph presents the transformation of
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travelers
visiting Caribbean Change the spelling
travellers
Island
over the years from 2010 to 2017. There are 2 types of Use synonyms
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travelers
consists of Change the spelling
travellers
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travelers
who Change the spelling
travellers
is
staying on cruise ships and staying on the Change the verb form
are
island
. Units are in millions.
In general, the number of Use synonyms
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travelers
has increased year by year, it reached Change the spelling
travellers
to
3.5 million Change preposition
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travelers
in 2017. Even though each Change the spelling
travellers
traveler
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traveller
types
is experiencing fluctuation.
There was no change in the sum total of visitors staying on cruise ships (0.75) until 2011, but Fix the agreement mistake
type
then
it doubled to 1.5 in 2013 until 2015. Linking Words
Whereas
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,
there is a slight decrease in 2016, the people who stayed on board are back to the previous amount again in 2017.
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apply
In
the other hand, the quantity of Change preposition
On
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travelers
staying on the Change the spelling
travellers
island
is the minority for 5 years until 2015. Use synonyms
However
starting in 2016, most of the Linking Words
travelers
are staying on the Use synonyms
island
. In 2017, it broke the record as the first year there Use synonyms
are
2 million visitors staying on the Wrong verb form
were
island
over the past 7 years.Use synonyms
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