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The table below gives information about marriages in Australia from 1960 to 2000

The table below gives information about marriages in Australia from 1960 to 2000
#information #marriages #australia
The table graph provides
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infirmation
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 about the number of people who got married in Australia between 1960 and 2000
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religious
marriages
 showed the highest trend in 1980
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marriages
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 trend than religious
marriages
 in 1980. And the
number of
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average
age
 of
bridegroom
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 is seen
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 highest rate than the average
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 in 1990
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gradually increased
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 42,000 , but civil
marriages
 recorded significantly dropped to 8,000. And
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age
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bride
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21
age
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age
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experienced
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 23
age
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steadily grew and reached
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46,000. And
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 figure a steady rise of 4000 to approximately 50,000 in 1980. But there was a
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sharp
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 32,000 in 1990. By 2000, that
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rose to 4000 and recorded 36000. And the level of civil
marriages
 published slowly went to 11,000 in 1970. And
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lasted
 until 1980 and showed 16,000. In 1990, there was a sharp increase to 28,000.
Then
,
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age
 of males at 23.
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 at 25
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 of females published at 23
age
 in 1970. Until 1990
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 result significantly increased to 28 when
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age
 of men displayed at 29
age
 in 1990. By 2000,
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age
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