You stayed in a hotel for some days in an overseas country. You have forgotten some things in the hotel room after checkout.  write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter Inform him about your stay Describe the things hat you have forgotten there State what you want them to do now

Dear Sir/

madam

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Madam

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, I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about my personal

items

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belongings in one of your hotel rooms. I stayed in your hotel from 4th to 10th

march

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March

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in room 202.

Reservation

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The reservation

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was made under my name.

Firstly

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, I left my

daimond

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diamond

ring and a bracelet in the room. My items should be located in the bathroom drawer.

Diamond

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The diamond

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ring is in the golden colour,

whereas

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the

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bracelet is in black colour. Both

the

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items are very precious

for

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me. I live in a different country

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;

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therefore

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, I would like to request you to mail it to my friend's house. He lives at

whalley st

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Whalley St

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, which is

just15kms

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just 15 km

away from your hotel.

Although

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if it is not possible for you to deliver it, I can arrange a pickup service as well. Please let me know what is more convenient

for

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for you

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you. I would be grateful for your prompt response. Your faithfully, Saransh Sharma

saranshs712

Mar 29, 2026

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task response

Add one more clear line about when you stayed and why you write.

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Say the items more clearly and check small word errors.

coherence and cohesion

Use easy linking words like first, also, and finally.

coherence and cohesion

Keep each paragraph on one main point only.

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You answered all parts of the task.

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Your tone is polite and right for a hotel manager.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

coherence and cohesion

Ideas are mostly easy to follow.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

155 words

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