The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph provides key information about the total number of
visitors
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the
particular Caribbean Correct article usage
a
island
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form
2010 to 2017. The units are measured in figures.
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from
Ovarall
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number
tourisits
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tourists
increase
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visitors
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stauing
on cruise ships showed a gradual Correct your spelling
staying
increase
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island
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a
gradual decline.
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shown
fist
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increase
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about
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of about
Millions
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visitors
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island
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showd
a remaind ratio in the first year, other Correct your spelling
showed
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visitors
staying on cruise ships increased slowly Use synonyms
about
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by about
visitors
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to
the next year the total figures still increased in a significant way almost 2.5 Change preposition
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millions
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million
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visitors
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shpis
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ships
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to around
million
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island
increased up to 1.5 Add an article
the island
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stable tell 2015.
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increase
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million
tourists. Use synonyms
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visitors
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island
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around
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by around
thousands
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thousand
then
increased to 1.5 Linking Words
million
in 2017. Use synonyms
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at
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the peroid
peroid
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period
millions
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million
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apply
visitors
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