In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
Currently, people have more curiosity about the history of the
places
they inhabit. There are many explanations why
dwellers want to acquire Change preposition
for why
this
information
. Besides
, the documentation could be found on paper or virtually as well as
there is an increasing population that keep
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keeps
this
valuable information
. In this
essay, I will explain why and how to investigate about
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apply
places
in which humankind lives.
To start with, it is crucial to know about the quality of the land where societies reside in order to establish what type of buildings could be constructed or measurements that should be taken into account. For example
, Bogota, which is the capital of Colombia, was built above a lake that is
well-known as 'Arzobispo'. Therefore
, there are many regions with a myriad of muddy waters. Then
, people must deeply know the events that have been pass
through the evolution of those Change the verb form
passing
passed
places
, and then
evaluate what are the proper materials to re-built and the infrastructure that is
allowed to construct
in a specific spot.
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be constructed
Secondly
, there are many resources with high-quality references where people can search the evidence. For instance
, Internet
has become a cutting-edge tool in which most of the Add an article
the Internet
information
is widely found, not only scientific papers and books of history but also
personal experiences. Additionally
, in the City, governments have safely kept the most preponderant guidelines of the
ancient times. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, the 'Agustin Codazzi' is a corporation located in Bogota where records and maps are save
and it is open to the whole population.
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are saved
To sum up
, there is a significant
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significant information
a piece of significant information
information
that should be known by the population if they want to live safely. Besides
, acquiring knowledge about places
where communities live is remarkable and represents sense
of belonging.Add an article
a sense
the sense
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task achievement
The essay addresses both parts of the task adequately, discussing the reasons why people are interested in the history of their houses and how they can research this information.
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