The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter •Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly •Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors •Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
The reason why I am addressing you is that our
neightborhod
is very shameful. The main reason why the system used for rubbish garbage Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
collection
in my local area is not working properly . Moreover
the road leading from the Add a comma
Moreover,
neightborhod
to the garbage disposal area is being repaired. Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
This
situation made our neightborhod
nervous.
The rubbish Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
collection
system is not working properly, thereupon
, Bad things spread like has on the streets of our neightborhod
. Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
This
bad smell caused damage and increased the number of bad insect
.
Change to a plural noun
insects
This
situation has bad
affected at the Change the adjective
badly
comminity
Correct your spelling
community
our
Correct word choice
and our
neightborhod
of children. It is Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
this
smell that causes the children of our neightborhod
to lose their health. Correct your spelling
neighbourhood
This
leads to Correct article usage
a decrease
decrease
quality of life and Wrong verb form
decreased
possible
decrease in Correct article usage
a possible
properly
values.
To Remedy Change the word
proper
this
situation that
it is improving the garbage Correct word choice
apply
collection
system, which could including
increasing the frequency of Replace the word
include
collection
introducing programs and ensuring consist
Replace the word
consistent
servise
. I asked Correct your spelling
service
local
council that prompt Correct article usage
the local
respoponse
and action to address and resolve waste issues.
I will look forward to your answer
Correct your spelling
response
Your
Sincerely,
John Brown.Correct the word
Yours
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a clear and single idea. For instance, separate the description of the problem and its effects into distinct paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Clarify and elaborate on points, providing more detailed information about how the situation specifically affects the community.
Coherence and Cohesion
Consider the use of varied sentence structures and ensure the proper use of prepositions and conjunctions to enhance readability.
Task Achievement
The letter addresses the prompt and covers all key points: describing the problem, its effects, and suggesting solutions.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate and respectful, fitting the formal requirement of addressing the local council.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and follow the conventions of a formal letter.