You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him / her to the party. In your letter: •explain the reason for the party •give the date and time of the party •suggest what the classmate could bring to the party Begin your letter as follows: Dear ________ You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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Dear Peter,
The reason I am writing to you is to invite you to a secret birthday party for Nemo, who felt overwhelmed and depressed lately.
To begin
with, my friends and I are concerned about Nemo's well-being these days and we want to cheer him up. We are considering going to the neighbouring village called Mihya to try rafting because he once said that he would like to try something new.
Secondly
, I would like to give you details about the date and time. It will take place on 10 May at 9am. We are going to meet near Nemo's house and then
call him and ask to go out. It must be a surprise for him so we do not say any details or hints. He will be so happy!
In addition
, we decided that every one of us would take something with us. Thus
, you can choose between fizzy drinks or fruits. Therefore
, we will have a picnic together after rafting.
To sum up
, I hope you will accept my invitation and, of course, If you have some questions, I would like to hear your opinion on that.
I look forward to your reply.
KseniiaSubmitted by ksrnnn on
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task achievement
Try to provide more specific details about the activities or events planned for the day to make the invitation more engaging.
coherence cohesion
Although the letter is well-structured, try to link the paragraphs more smoothly to enhance the overall flow.
coherence cohesion
Double-check punctuation and consider varying sentence structure to make the letter more dynamic.
task achievement
You provided a clear reason for the party, including an explanation of Nemo's recent feelings.
suitable writing tone
The letter has a warm and inviting tone, which is appropriate for the task.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph addresses a single idea, and the closing is very effective and polite.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,