You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good you want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer.
Dear Tulus
I hope you are doing great, my name is Nurul Hikmah.
Iam
from Sumbawa. Correct your spelling
I am
First,
i
am Change the capitalization
I
wiritig
Correct your spelling
writing
this
letter to tell you about what i
Change the capitalization
I
feel
about Wrong verb form
felt
you
performance yesterday At Gelora Studion, as you know Correct pronoun usage
your
i
Change the capitalization
I
am
very into Wrong verb form
have been
to
you since Change preposition
apply
i
Change the capitalization
I
am
in middle school.
I want you Wrong verb form
was
know
Add the particle
to know
i
am delighted Change the capitalization
I
due
to
your performance, Change preposition
with
last
year when you comed
to show Correct your spelling
came
in
Mataram, Change preposition
up in
unfortunately
Add the comma(s)
unfortunately,
i
Change the capitalization
I
cannot
see you because Wrong verb form
could not
i
was doing Change the capitalization
I
Correct article usage
a tesis
tesis
exam. I am very sad and down to know Correct your spelling
this
i
do not have Change the capitalization
I
Add an article
a change
the change
change
to see you. But Correct your spelling
chance
finally
you Add a comma
finally,
come
again to Wrong verb form
came
concert
here. In Correct article usage
the concert
the
Correct article usage
apply
fact
you are Add a comma
fact,
very
handsome and sweet person. your voice Add an article
a very
so
smooth and nice. Add a missing verb
is so
Neverthelees
, when Correct your spelling
Nevertheless
i
want Change the capitalization
I
took
Change the verb form
to take
picture
with you yesterday, your Add an article
a picture
the picture
assistand
Correct your spelling
assistant
not
allow me, probably because you feltChange the verb form
does not
did not
exshausted
.
Correct your spelling
exhausted
However
, i
Change the capitalization
I
want
invite my friends to show your performance again. Add the particle
want to
In addition
, that is
best
opportunity for me, i Change the article
the best
hopefully
you can come again and take Replace the word
hope
picture
with me, i am so Add an article
a picture
sory
to Correct your spelling
sorry
intterup
your time. and thank you for your best concert yesterday.
Sincerely
NurulCorrect your spelling
interrupt
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Grammar
Work on correcting grammatical errors such as subject-verb agreement and proper tense usage. This will improve the readability of your letter.
Organization
Try to structure your paragraphs so that each one focuses on a single idea. This will help improve the coherence of your writing.
Content
You effectively communicated your feelings and experiences, which is central to the task.
Tone
Your use of a respectful and admiring tone is suitable for the intended audience.