The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbishment. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.

The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbishment.  The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,  during the same two period.
The given table shows the comparison between the numbers of
people
who visit the museum before and after its renewal.
In addition
, the pie charts illustrate the effects of the refurbishment on Visitor's opinions. It can be clearly seen that the refurbishment had a positive impact on
people
's satisfaction and the number of visitors. Before the reconstruction of the museum, the number of individuals who visited was 74,000. These numbers rise to 92,000 following the building renovation. In terms of a public survey, the year before the restoration, the majority of
people
(40%) were dissatisfied with their experience there. Continued with satisfied choice at 30%. The rest are given at, 15, 10,and
5percent
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5 per cent
for Very satisfied, Very dissatisfied, and No response, respectively. Following the restoration, there was a noticeable change in the result of the survey. Most visitors chose the option Satisfied (40%) and Dissatisfied (35%).
Furthermore
, the number of
people
who picked Dissatified dropped to just a quarter.
Finally
, the minority given both at 5 per cent chose Very Dissatisfied and No Response.
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