Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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days some people think that

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should be taught to be nice

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of society by their

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argue that academic institutions are the place to

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them.

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essay will discuss both of these views ;

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personally agree with the first one

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should teach their

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how to be good citizens. On the one hand,

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tends to be the most popular place that allows any student to develop both common knowledge and personal hard skills. It can be explained by the fact that teens can easily create social circles with their teachers and peers through communication and interaction in the

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environment.

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, they can be taught by their teachers how to treat their friends kindly,

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build their own good behaviours through practising that with each other.

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line of reasoning is not sound because almost all

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go to

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at around six years old,

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, their characteristics are probably found at an earlier age since they have started to be aware of everything that has happened in their lives.

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very fact renders the idea that

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is the place for a child to learn how to be nice insignificant. To add

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credence to my assertion, it is obvious that

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are pioneers who help their

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to

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good awareness and kind behaviours as soon as they are well-recognized by more things around them. The prime reason for

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is that at the

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stage, a child tries to imitate many words and actions of adults.

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,

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who are closest to their

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will become role models for them as they learn how to talk and act towards other people.

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, if

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that their father helps their mother do housework, they will memorize it and

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re-do it to support their mom when they grow older, as long as they have the ability to do that thing. In conclusion, it is controversial whether

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or teachers should train

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how to become helpful members of society. From my perspective, I believe that

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should take the main responsibility for educating their

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to behave kindly towards others.