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The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.
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Contained in the bar chart is data pertaining to the time that
students
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 spend on
study
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 during the week and at the weekend.
Overall
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, the number of
students
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 spending on studying during
weekdays
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 is higher than at weekends.
Additionally
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,
students
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 in
University
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 C
study
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 the most on
weekdays
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while
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University
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 D's
students
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 spend at least during the week. Looking at the figures for
students
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'
study
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 time on
weekdays
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,
university
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 C's
students
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 lead the list, dedicating 10,6
hours
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 per day to studying, closely followed by
universities
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 B and E with figures hovering around 10
hours
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. The
study
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 durations of
students
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 at
universities
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 A and D are relatively consistent, ranging between 9,6 and 9,8
hours
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. On weekends,
students
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 across all
universities
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 reduce their
study
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 time.
University
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 A shows the most signification difference from weekday figures, with
students
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 studying for 9
hours
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.
Conversely
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, the most reduction is observed at
universities
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 D and E about 4
hours
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 less than on
weekdays
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. The
study
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 duration for
students
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 at
universities
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 C and B decreases by 2.8 and 1,5
hours
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, respectively, compared to
weekdays
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, study, weekdays, university, hours, universities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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