You live in a room in college which you can share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter • Describe the situation • Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain
some
problems with the arrangement of my room which is shared with another student in the college.
To clarify, I am a Change preposition
about some
medicine
student and I need a quiet place to meet my goals. Replace the word
medical
However
, I find it difficult to concentrate while
preparing my courses due to
several parties which is being held by my roommate on a regular basis. These parties are making a lot of noises
and Fix the agreement mistake
noise
cause
disturbances. Wrong verb form
causing
In addition
, our time for studying and college program
are different. Fix the agreement mistake
programs
Although
she prefers to stay up late to study at night, I got used to study
in the morning. Change the verb form
studying
As a result
of this
, I cannot sleep and concentrate well.
To remedy this
situation, I suggested that you replace my room with a private one with other medical student
in order to Change the wording
another medical student
other medical students
providing
a quiet place and optimum study plan adaptation.
I hope Change the verb
provide
this
matter will be dealt with you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Mahshid KaSubmitted by kargar.mh1992 on
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suitable writing tone
Ensure consistent tone and appropriate word choice throughout your letter.
complete response
Expand on how the suggested solution will benefit both yourself and your roommate.
logical structure
The letter was structured logically, with clear paragraphs for each point.
complete response
You effectively conveyed your main concerns and how they affect your studies.