The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar
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chart
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illustrates the scores of teams A,
B
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and
C
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over four different
seasons
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from 2002 to 2005.
Overall
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,
Team
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B
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constantly
to achieve
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the highest scores,
while
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Team
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C
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resulted to have
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the lowest scores, especially in the late
seasons
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. The highest
score
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for all four
seasons
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was
Team
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B
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, in 2002,
Team
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B
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scored a significant 82
points
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, far surpassing
Team
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A and
Team
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C
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, with only 5 and 10
points
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respectively.
Although
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Team
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B
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’s
score
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decreased to 43
points
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in 2004, it still remains to be the highest
score
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for all four
seasons
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.
While
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Team
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A and
Team
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C
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scored
similarly
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low, with only 11 and 15
points
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. The lowest
score
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in 2002 and 2003 was
Team
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A, with only 5 and 11
points
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respectively,
however
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,
Team
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A showed
the
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improvement with a rise of its
score
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to 35
points
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in 2004.
In contrast
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,
Team
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C
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’s
score
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remained low at 12
points
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, which resulted it to be lowest
score
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team
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from 2004 onward.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words b, c, seasons, team, score, points with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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