The bar graph below shows the consumption of natural gas world wide from 1950 to 1990.

The bar graph below shows the consumption of natural gas world wide from 1950 to 1990.
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graphic illustrates the percentage-wise consumption of energy from different sources in the years 1998 and 2002.
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, Petroleum was the main source of energy in both these years, which was followed by Natural gas and Coal in a similar proportion. It is interesting to note that in 1998, more than one-third of the energy needs were met by petroleum.
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, there was a marginal increase in its demand in 2002 by three per
cent
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.
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, the utilization of other fossil fuels namely Coal and Natural Gas for the power sector was less than petroleum at just above one-quarter in 1998.These figures,
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, remained almost the same in the year 2002 with an insignificant rise in their usage by almost 1 per
cent
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. In striking contrast to fossil fuels, there was only a meagre contribution from Nuclear and Renewable sources, which was just above 5 per
cent
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in 1998.
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the electric power generated from Nuclear means rose slightly by two per
cent
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in 2002, the power generation from Renewable sources,
on the other hand
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, declined by one per
cent
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as compared to 1998.
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