The bar graph below shows the consumption of natural gas world wide from 1950 to 1990.

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graphic illustrates the percentage-wise consumption of energy from different sources in the years 1998 and 2002.

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, Petroleum was the main source of energy in both these years, which was followed by Natural gas and Coal in a similar proportion. It is interesting to note that in 1998, more than one-third of the energy needs were met by petroleum.

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, there was a marginal increase in its demand in 2002 by three per

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, the utilization of other fossil fuels namely Coal and Natural Gas for the power sector was less than petroleum at just above one-quarter in 1998.These figures,

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, remained almost the same in the year 2002 with an insignificant rise in their usage by almost 1 per

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. In striking contrast to fossil fuels, there was only a meagre contribution from Nuclear and Renewable sources, which was just above 5 per

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in 1998.

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the electric power generated from Nuclear means rose slightly by two per

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in 2002, the power generation from Renewable sources,

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, declined by one per

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as compared to 1998.

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The bar graph below shows the consumption of natural gas world wide from 1950 to 1990.

Many feel that the common educational system of teachers and students in a classroom will be replaced by the year 2050. Do you agree with this view? Give your opinion.

Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business option. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue the government should support the funds for arts, while others suggest the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In mant countries are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

Unemployment is a growing problem all over the world. What are the causes of this? What could be done to help tackle this issue? To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?