The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts represent the retail stores selling
via
online since 2005 with Change preposition
apply
projection
for 2010 in Canada.There were four retail Fix the agreement mistake
projections
store
in Change to a plural noun
stores
this
survey which were Linking Words
electronics
and appliances, food and beverage , home Use synonyms
furnitures
and video games.
In 2005,the highest proportion of online Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
selling
was Replace the word
sales
electronics
and appliances-35 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
and the lowest proportion was video games-18 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
,in 2010, most of Canada’s Linking Words
consumer
spent their Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
money
on Use synonyms
electronics
and appliances ,but Use synonyms
people
spent Use synonyms
money
on food and beverage in the lowest percentage.Use synonyms
Moreover
, comparing between 2005 and 2010, Linking Words
people
bought more Use synonyms
on
online shopping in food and beverage- increasing 10 Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
percent
and video games- rising 5 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
Although
Linking Words
people
spent less Use synonyms
money
on furniture-decreasing 10 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
,it can be seen from the pie charts that the highest percentage of Linking Words
people
consumed Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
apply
electronics
and appliances in both 2005 and 2010.Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
consumer
Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
spent
less Wrong verb form
spend
money
on online shopping Use synonyms
in
home Change preposition
for
furnitures
.Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electronics, percent, money, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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