The diagram below shows the process for producing bricks Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The diagram shows the act
that is
used to produce bricks
for the building industry.
Overall
, there are several stages which was consist of beginning with the digging up of clay
and finishing with delivery
of Correct article usage
the delivery
bricks
to the
their destination.
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apply
The
first step, the Change preposition
In the
clay
is obtained on the ground by using a large digger than
the Correct your spelling
then
clay
is inserted onto a metal grid, which is used to divided
the Change the form of the verb
divide
clay
into smaller pieces and a roller will be helping
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help
this
work. After that, sand and water are mixed to
the Change preposition
into
clay
, and this
composite is rotated into bricks
by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cut. Thereafter
, bricks
left
for 24-48 hours Add a missing verb
are left
to
drying oven to dry.
In the subsequent stage, the Change preposition
in
bricks
sent
to a warming and cooling process and they are heated in a kiln at a middle Add a missing verb
are sent
then
a high temperature ( range from 200c to 1300c),followed by a cooling act in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours. Ultimately, the bricks
are packed an
delivered to their clients.Correct your spelling
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