The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
The table presents the data on the expenditure by consumers on various goods and services in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002. The information is presented in terms of average spending as a percentage of national
consumer
.(39)
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consumers
Overall
, it is clear that
the most popular items to spend on in all five countries were food and beverages and tobacco. The least amount of outlay was observed on leisure and education in the aforementioned countries.(37)
To begin
with, consumer expenses on Food and drinks /Tobacco ranging
from 15,77% in Sweden to 32,14% in Turkey, Wrong verb form
ranged
indicates
that Turkey had the highest and Sweden had the lowest position in that category, Wrong verb form
indicating
meanwhile
the second,third and Add a comma
meanwhile,
forth
places were occupied by Ireland,Spain and Italy which contributed 28,91%, 18,80% and 16,36%, respectively.
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fourth
In addition
, it is notable that the percentage of expending
by Irish Replace the word
expenses
were
6,43% in Clothing/Footwear compared to 2,21% in Leisure/Education. Followed by Correct subject-verb agreement
was
this
, Italian, Spanish, Swedes and Turkish spent 9,00%, 6,51%, 5,40%, 6,63
%, respectively, Correct word choice
and 6,63
whereas
the ratio
in Fix the agreement mistake
ratios
latter
category were 3,20%, 1,98%, 3,22% and 4,35%, Add an article
the latter
accordingly
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