The graph shows average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Sydney

The graph shows average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Sydney
The provided line chart illustrates the average temperatures in three
defferent
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different
countries in
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different
region
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in the interval from January to December.
Overall
, What stands out is that Dubai's numbers outnumber the others and
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as
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the
hotest
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throughout the summer
While
Sydney is the coldest relatively. With regards to Dubai, the temperature
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moderately in the first three months and outraced Sydney's one in March.
In addition
, the red line will have a noticeable growth and continue until it
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a peak at just above 35.
However
, the numbers will
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dramatically in a
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period
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become around 20. Meanwhile, the trajectory of
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was almost as some as Dubai with a significant
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from 5 to 15 Celcius in May.
Nevertheless
,
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slight upward movement could be seen before it
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to its peak at 20
Culcius
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Celsius
.
Moreover
, the temperature will level off between July and August before it nosedived to an identical level of January.
In contrast
, in Sydney, the
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dip over the interval with a range of approximately 24C in the first month of the year and about 23C in the
last
one.
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