The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opended in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph demonstrates the
closures
and openings
of the shop in a nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the number of closures
overtakes that of openings
at the end
. There is a huge drop of
new Change preposition
in
shops
in one year before the recover
. Interestingly, the trend Replace the word
recovery
also
shows that the openings
seems
to decrease continuously.
In 2011, the Change the verb form
seem
openings
were at their peak at over 8,000 shops
. However
, it dropped to 4,000 a year later. This
bounced back to 6,000 and down to 4,000 before remaining stable at around 4,000 until 2017. In year
2018, the number of Change the article
the year
openings
fell to the
lowest point at 3,000.
For the Change the word
its
closures
, it is clear that
the shops
closed in 2011 started at around 6,500 shops
and fluctuated between 6,000 and 7,000 before coming down to 6,500 in 2014. It is the alarming drop, which took place in 2015 as the closures
came to about 500 shops
before it skyrocketed to a little above 5,000 where it remained stable until 2018.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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