The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opended in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opended in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph demonstrates the
closures
and
openings
of the shop in a nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the number of
closures
overtakes that of
openings
at the end
. There is a huge drop
of
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new
shops
in one year before the
recover
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. Interestingly, the trend
also
shows that the
openings
seems
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to decrease continuously. In 2011, the
openings
were at their peak at over 8,000
shops
.
However
, it dropped to 4,000 a year later.
This
bounced back to 6,000 and down to 4,000 before remaining stable at around 4,000 until 2017. In
year
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2018, the number of
openings
fell to
the
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lowest point at 3,000. For the
closures
,
it is clear that
the
shops
closed in 2011 started at around 6,500
shops
and fluctuated between 6,000 and 7,000 before coming down to 6,500 in 2014. It is the alarming drop, which took place in 2015 as the
closures
came to about 500
shops
before it skyrocketed to a little above 5,000 where it remained stable until 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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