The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opended in one country between 2011 and 2018
The line graph reviews the closures and openings of shops in one nation from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
,both graphs start with a larger number
and end with a decreasing number
. The number
of stores
that initially
opened was more than the stores
that closed, but by the time it was over the number
of stores
that had closed would have been greater. Both graphs probably won’t go up any more than this
.
In
2011, was the year that Change preposition
apply
the
most Correct article usage
apply
stores
were opened with 8,500 stores
and 6,500 stores
closed. In 2012, the number
of stores
that opening
decreased the fastest, Wrong verb form
opened
while
the number
of stores
closed continued to decrease gradually. In
2012 to 2014 the Change preposition
From
stores
that Correct quantifier usage
number of stores
opening
increased consistently, but the Wrong verb form
opened
number
of closed shops increased and decreased remained the same. In 2015, the number
of stores
opened dropped to 4,000 and constantly to 2017 and decreased to 3,000 shops in 2018. In 2015, the number
of stores
that closed enormously was only 500 stores
and in 2016 it increased greatly to 5,000 stores
and remained constant until 2018.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, stores with synonyms.
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