The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opended in one country between 2011 and 2018

The line graph reviews the closures and openings of shops in one nation from 2011 to 2018.

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,both graphs start with a larger

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and end with a decreasing

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. The

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of

stores

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that

initially

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opened was more than the

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that closed, but by the time it was over the

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of

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that had closed would have been greater. Both graphs probably won’t go up any more than

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2011, was the year that

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most

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were opened with 8,500

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and 6,500

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closed. In 2012, the

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of

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that

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decreased the fastest,

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the

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of

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closed continued to decrease gradually.

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2012 to 2014 the

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stores

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number of stores

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that

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increased consistently, but the

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of closed shops increased and decreased remained the same. In 2015, the

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of

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opened dropped to 4,000 and constantly to 2017 and decreased to 3,000 shops in 2018. In 2015, the

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of

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that closed enormously was only 500

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and in 2016 it increased greatly to 5,000

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and remained constant until 2018.