The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph demonstrates the
number
of shops
that closed and opened during
2011 and 2018 in one country.
Change preposition
between
Overall
, the number
of shops
that opened are
higher than the Change the verb form
is
number
of shops
that closed in
the beginning of the graph. These numbers of Change the preposition
at
shops
have increased and decreased. At the end
of the graph, it is clear that
the number
of closing shops
overtake
the Change the verb form
overtakes
number
of opening shops
.
The number
of shops
that opened started from 8,500 shops
in 2011 and decreased to 4,000 shops
in 2012. However
, in 2014 the number
of shops
that opened increased to 6,000 shops
. Four years later, the number
of opening shops
decreased to 3,000 shops
.
The number
of closed shops
started with less than 7,000 shops
in 2011. Two years after that, the number
of shops
that closed increased gradually to a little over 7,000 shops
. Nevertheless
, in 2015 the number
of closed shops
greatly decreased to less than 1,000 shops
. Three years later, the number
of shops
that closed increased again to 5,000 shops
.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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