The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates how much was emitted of
an
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apply
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average
carbon
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dioxide
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for
individual
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individuals
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in
United
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the United
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Kingdom,
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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, people in Italy and Portugal
was
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experienced an
increasing
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increase in
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of
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the of
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amount
emission
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emissions
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per individual, it is
also
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clear that despite some
fluctuated
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of
United
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the United
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Kingdom and
Sweden
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were considered
decrease
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around that period.
Italain
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Italian
were
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emitted
carbon
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dioxide
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about
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of about
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4 metric
tonnes
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to almost 8
units
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between 1967 to 2007.
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, from 1967 the average intake
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carbon
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of carbon
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dioxide
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was emitted around
a metric
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a metric tonne
metric tonnes
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tonnes
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and
insteadly
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instead
increased to 5.5 metric
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dioxide
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dioxides
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and remained stable until 2007. The figure for
Sweden
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started in the first year
about
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at about
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8
units
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and hovered at
peak
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a peak
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in 1977
about
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at about
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10
units
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,
while
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it experienced
dramatically declined
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in 2007 by 5 metric
tonnes
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. Meanwhile,
United
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the United
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Kingdom slowly dropped from around about 10
units
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intake
carbon
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dioxide
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per person and slowly declined
about
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to about
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8 metric
tonnes
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which
equal
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was equal
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to the starting emission intake per person in
Sweden
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by 1967.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, sweden, tonnes, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • CO2 emissions
  • per capita
  • decline
  • increase
  • trend
  • comparison
  • industrial growth
  • economic development
  • green energy
  • environmental policy
  • Kyoto Protocol
  • EU regulations
  • technological advancement
  • population growth
  • international agreements
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