The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, ltaly and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, sweden, tonnes, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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