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The chart below shows the price in Euros of four types of bread per kilogram in one European country from 2001 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the price in Euros of four types of bread per kilogram in one European country from 2001 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart depicts the money spent
in
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 Euros
of
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 four different types of
bread
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 which are (
wholegrain
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, brown, white and rye) using kg measurements in
an
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a
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 European country in the period of 2001 till 2005.
Overall
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, the most expensive type of
bread
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 was the
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wholegrain
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whole grain
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.
Whereas
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, the other three types were all around the same price in the year 2001. There is a noticeable
surged
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 in the year 2002 for the
wholegrain
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bread
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 where it reached
to
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1.8 Euros. Both the
wholegrain
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 and the brown
bread
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 rose but
then
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 they fell dramatically over the years.
On the other hand
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, the white and rye
bread
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 had a steady and constant rise in
the
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price.

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