The table below gives information about students enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008.

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Bristol

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University in different years,

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1928, 1958 and 2008. The table compares the

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of enrolments of

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University

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three different years.

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in each period the number of admitted candidates increased significantly. In 1928 the

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captured the biggest proportion of admitted

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with the number of 58

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the

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from abroad

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the lowest with 5 %. When it came to the data in 1958 there was a considerable decrease from 42% to 32% in the figures

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. The same trend was

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observed in the acceptance of student

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within 30 miles

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as from 50% to 14%.

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the proportion the

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and

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from abroad increased in 1958. The figure for

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10% from 58 to 68 and the date

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gradually climbed from 5% to 6%. When it comes to 2008,

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the

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of admitted foreign

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had an enormous growth from 6% to 28%. There was

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a considerable climb in the proportion of

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from 32% to 54 %. In 2008 the

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of admitted

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from 30 miles within

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dramatically

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to 1-2 %

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for

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the same trend followed from 68% to 46 %. (Samir Nabiyev)