The diagram below shows the process for recycling products

The diagram below shows the process for recycling products
The picture below illustrates how the trash is recycled step by step,
besides
that, in the second stage where the goods are in the crowds, 2 choices are available.
Firstly
, after its beginning, the products are bought and consumed by the crowds,
furthermore
, there are 2 ways to choose, in the first way all bags and rubbish are left in the garbage and eventually transported to the landfill.
On the contrary
, the trucks usually go to a sorting house where is the destination those bottles collected by individuals,
on the other hand
, those trucks go to a processing factory in order to make the things recycled, and
then
, the products which have been processed are sent to the shop to sell the folks again.
Overall
, the process starts from a shop and ends there, the products will go through many steps which are relative to lots of people and many factories,
nevertheless
, some are unrecycled and are transported to the landfill.
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