In some countries, women now are able to join the armed forces on equal basis with men. However, some people feel that only men should be members of the army, navy or Air Force. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, some countries have already developed an enlightening society and females can join the

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which used to only be available for men. Some claimed that

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phenomenon should be prohibited and only men should be soldiers. I put forward that

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suggestion is kind of incorrect. People who are in line with

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suggestion may point out that

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kind of job requires considerable physical strength, and men are far superior to

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when considering

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.

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it is fair to say in the

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,

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tend to underperform and even fail to meet the basic standards, and their presence may put their colleagues in a disadvantageous position.

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,

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usually have weaker endurance, so their existence will slow down the speed of the

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marching, increasing the risk of being attacked during wartime.

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,

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an attitude is merely something that stems from stereotypes, since nowadays

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joining the

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does not automatically mean that they will be allocated on the battlefield, they could play an indisputable crucial role in technology innovations

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. The thinking style could vary a lot between different genders, which means when they are collaborating, they can do divergent thinking and inspire creativity, boosting efficiency dramatically. What is more, another benefit of applying females into the

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is that it actually augments

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’s social status. Some may have insular mentalities about

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, considering them

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delicate.

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practice could eliminate it and contribute to removing gender discrimination. In a nutshell, I suppose that though most

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demonstrate a weaker body than males, which is not suitable for being a soldier, they could play a major role in technological developments and

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policy can promote gender equality. So

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should be encouraged to join the

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worldwide.