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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

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 management is an essential skill for success in real
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. Whether
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 should acquire
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 tool during their study at university and divide the
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 between lessons and pleasure by themselves or should they be controlled by superiors has become a debated question nowadays. I agree with those who claim that
students
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 should be allowed to manage their
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, as
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 will prepare them for reality and will be more efficient from
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 perspective. The first argument in favour of independent
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 management is the fact, that in real life no one will control how much a person is working or resting. Learning how to balance between fundamental requests is substantial and definitely should be part of education.
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, high education can be a perfect place to understand the correlation between the investments in the study, in terms of hours, and results,
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 experience will be very helpful in
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 future career, as provides
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 with a practical
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 management understanding. The second thing that should be taken into consideration, is that all people are different and they know themself better than anyone else. No doubt, that in order to achieve the same result different personalities will need different amounts of learning and different amounts of resting.
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, for people who have problems with concentration, the best way of learning will be to integrate
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 activities between the lessons. Some
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 prefer to learn at night,
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 others perform better in the morning.
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 preferences are individual, and by considering them better results can be achieved.
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, tertial education is the right place to figure out the best way to balance
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 between different activities. As all
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 are not similar and have their unique needs, I claim that they should take responsibility to manage the free and study times for themselves.
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 will benefit the young generation and will help them to achieve personal aims
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 will better prepare them for real life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • time management
  • self-discipline
  • personal responsibility
  • motivation
  • engagement
  • peak productivity periods
  • real-world demands
  • effective time management
  • controlled environment
  • learning preferences
  • academic performance
  • potential drawbacks
  • misuse
  • procrastinate
  • frameworks and support
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