The diagram below shows the changes, which took place in a coastal area called Pentland from 1950 to 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagrams below.

The diagram below shows the changes, which took place in a coastal area called 

Pentland from 1950 to 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the 

diagrams below.
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The maps reveal developments in the coastal
area
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named Portland over 5 decades starting from 1950.
Overall
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, the maps illustrate an alternation from a mainly industrial
area
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to a large and more tourist
area
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. The most notable alternation was that the grassland south of the industrial
area
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was cleared and replaced with a new tourist and commercial
area
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. New houses were constructed across the
road
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. The industrial
area
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was demolished and replaced with a swimming pool and park, and
also
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the car park was relocated to the industrial
area
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. On the north of the
road
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, the Yacht Marina was constructed and new apartments replaced the car park. The new shops were constructed on both sides of the
road
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on the south, and
also
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the new cinema was constructed on one side of the
road
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on the southwest. All of
this
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construction reduced the grassland
area
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. In conclusion, most part of the map was changed between 1950 and 2007, which caused to conversion of the industrial and natural areas to residential and tourist areas.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • coastal area
  • transformation
  • landscape
  • land use
  • infrastructure
  • environmental modifications
  • residential development
  • urban living spaces
  • commercial areas
  • recreational facilities
  • economic landscape
  • green spaces
  • natural habitats
  • urban expansion
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