The diagram below shows the changes, which took place in a coastal area called Pentland from 1950 to 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagrams below.
The maps reveal developments in the coastal
area
named Portland over 5 decades starting from 1950. Overall
, the maps illustrate an alternation from a mainly industrial area
to a large and more tourist area
.
The most notable alternation was that the grassland south of the industrial area
was cleared and replaced with a new tourist and commercial area
. New houses were constructed across the road
. The industrial area
was demolished and replaced with a swimming pool and park, and also
the car park was relocated to the industrial area
. On the north of the road
, the Yacht Marina was constructed and new apartments replaced the car park. The new shops were constructed on both sides of the road
on the south, and also
the new cinema was constructed on one side of the road
on the southwest. All of this
construction reduced the grassland area
.
In conclusion, most part of the map was changed between 1950 and 2007, which caused to conversion of the industrial and natural areas to residential and tourist areas.Submitted by shahab.a on
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