Some people believe that animals must be used for conducting laboratory tests, while other people think that animals are innocent creatures and we must not exploit them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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animals
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vaccnates
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against
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The essay clearly addresses both viewpoints on using animals for laboratory tests, demonstrating a balanced understanding of the subject.
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There is a good attempt to provide relevant examples, such as mentioning flu vaccine testing and cosmetic products testing.
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