The line graph illustrates the consumption of fish and various types of meat in grams per person per week in a European country over the period from 1979 to 2004.
The line graph illustrates the
consumption
of Use synonyms
fish
and various types of meat in Use synonyms
grams
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
in a European country over the period from 1979 to 2004.
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Overall
, chicken Linking Words
consumption
showed a consistent upward trend, beef Use synonyms
consumption
experienced fluctuations with an Use synonyms
overall
decrease, lamb Linking Words
consumption
declined steadily, Use synonyms
while
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fish
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consumption
remained relatively stable with slight variations over the years.
Chicken Use synonyms
consumption
started at around 150 Use synonyms
grams
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
in 1979, Use synonyms
then
rapidly increased to nearly 250 Linking Words
grams
by 1989 before continuing on a gradual rise to around 260 Use synonyms
grams
in 2004. Beef Use synonyms
consumption
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on the other hand
, began at just over 200 Linking Words
grams
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
and after a slight decline, peaked at around 225 Use synonyms
grams
in 1989, followed by a steady decrease to just below 100 Use synonyms
grams
by 2004. Lamb Use synonyms
consumption
started at approximately 150 Use synonyms
grams
in 1979, saw a minor increase Use synonyms
initially
, but Linking Words
then
consistently declined to around 55 Linking Words
grams
by 2004.
In terms of Use synonyms
fish
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consumption
, it started at slightly below 50 Use synonyms
grams
per Use synonyms
person
per Use synonyms
week
in 1979 and showed minor fluctuations over the years. By 2004, Use synonyms
fish
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consumption
had increased slightly, ending just above 50 Use synonyms
grams
. Despite some ups and downs, the Use synonyms
overall
trend for Linking Words
fish
Use synonyms
consumption
remained relatively stable compared to the other types of meat during the period under consideration.Use synonyms
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