THese days many people have their own computeres and telephones, so it is quite easyfo them to work at home. DOes working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages
Nowadays usually people have their own computers and mobile phones. Technology coming up you lose more
fastly
and now not expensive. I think the two ways have different situations
Especially, If you don't have a computer the company Rephrase
fast
give
you Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
for
Correct pronoun usage
one for
working
. Nowadays not a big deal. Replace the word
work
Nevertheless
, if you work
at home
this
is good for time
management. In contrast
Add a comma
,
time
on the way to work
. By the way, I prefer to work
at home
. Because home
is since,
ı don't see any workers Remove the comma
apply
also
my manager. I prepare my lunch at home
. I think that the clean food. Another thing is you can work
everywhere. Just you need the internet. In summer time
I worked from our summer house. I work
and rest for three months.
In contrast
to
, you Change preposition
apply
work
office
that's more
social area but too much noise and crowd. I do not prefer that. Sometimes they want to be social. Correct article usage
a more
This
is necessary for humanism. The office
vibe is good for mental health. And some meetings Add a missing verb
are successfully
successfully
because face-to-face communication is better than online. I'm living in Istanbul and Istanbul very crowded city. And if your Change the word
successful
home
-to-workwork destination is not close you have to spend more time
on transportation. it's exhausting and when you come home
you are very tired
To sum up
, I prefer to work
remotely. However
, office
life is not bad. In my opinion
3 days Add a comma
opinion,
work
remotely and 2 days working at the office
. This
situation is better for success
Replace the word
successful
work
. Less energy for the company because they not
Change the verb form
do not
did not
work
in the office
3
days.Change preposition
for 3
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