The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The pie chart gives information about the employment status of
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graduates
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from a particular university after completing their undergraduate degree course, and the table illustrates how much the anthropologists in three different types of employment got paid after five years. In general, it is evident that
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the percentage of
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graduates
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doing full-time
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after receiving their undergraduate degree was highest, the opposite was true for those choosing part-time
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and postgraduate study.
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, after 5
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work
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, the proportions of anthropologists working as freelance consultants and in the
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sector
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with the lowest salary range were exactly the same,
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the highest figure can be seen in that of those working in the
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sector
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with the highest-paid. Regarding the pie chart, the majority of
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graduates
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had a full-time job, at 52%,
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the proportions of those only working part-time and the unemployed were significantly lower, at only 15% and 12% respectively. Meanwhile, the figures for
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graduates
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choosing full-time postgraduate study and the unknown group were identical, at 8%,
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only 5% of
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majoring in
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chose to do part-time
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and pursue postgraduate study at the same time. Turning to the table,
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graduates
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with a salary range between 25.000 and 49.999 dollars accounted for the smallest proportion of those working as freelance consultants and in the
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sector
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after 5 years, at only 5%, which was half the figure for private companies.
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, the percentages of those working as freelance consultants, in the
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sector
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and in private companies with the most generous salary in the table were considerably higher, at 40%, 50% and 30% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words anthropology, graduates, work, government, sector with synonyms.
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