The bar chart shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The population of American
families
with different levels of Use synonyms
income
in 2007, 2011 and 2015 is illustrated in the bar chart.
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throughout the three Linking Words
years
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years,
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and
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families
with Use synonyms
100,000
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a 100,000
income
have been the first with 2011 being an exception.
In 2007 25 Use synonyms
million
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famillies
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families
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least
income
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experiences
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experienced
million
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upcomming
years. The rate of households with Correct your spelling
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the most
income
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million
people and Use synonyms
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experienced a
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decrese
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decrease
million
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the
peaked in 2015 by 35 Correct article usage
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million
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families
.
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families
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of families
other
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the other
income
groups who earn from 25000 to 99.999 show Use synonyms
an
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families
who Use synonyms
recieve
under 50000 dollars being consistently below 30 Correct your spelling
receive
million
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famillies
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families
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than
million
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income
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