The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph illustrates the
demand
for energy
that is
available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
, the demand
for energy
increased at the end
of the period, while
energy
that is
ready for use decreased over the period.
On the one hand, energy
demand
started at around 5.1 units
in 1985 and significantly declined to 2 units
or around 200 billion megajoules in the next 10 years, then
steadily until
1995. Furthermore
, the demand
for energy
has jumped rapidly and hit a peak at 7 units
at the end
of 2005.
On the other hand
, accessible energy
began at approximately 3.8 units
in 1985. In the next 10 years, the energy
available rose to around 6.5 units
or 650 billion megajoules, then
dropped to about 2.7 units
in 2000. In addition
, the energy
that can be used is stable at 270 billion megajealous until 2005.Submitted by napatnp18065322 on
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